VIP Class Notes (Jacob) [W]

Write about your favorite foods and how much you can eat (use the new words from today)

Vocabulary

Piece – puzzle,
eg. I can eat 5 pieces of cake.
eg. I can eat 20 pieces of fried chicken.
eg. A big pizza has 8 pieces of paper

Mistake – 错误 

Notebook – 笔记本

Bowl – 腕子

Corn – 玉米

Soup – 汤

Grammar

Give me a cup/glass of hot water.
Give me a bowl of corn soup
Can I have a plate of fried noodles

Test
I like to eat candy and I like to eat it often.
My puzzle has 100 pieces, the first 50 pieces is easy.

Game [Hangman]

• newspaper
• fries
• Body

Original

Tonight I played puzzle. But one puzzle was gone.But me and my dad Dr Smile were happy.The puzzle had 100 pieces.I played puzzles with my dad.My dad Dr Smile likes my puzzle.Tonight I ate beans, pork,carrots and rice.I think they were so delicious.

Make sentences
I like car and I like truck.
I study English because my English was so bad.
I drive the car so I can go to everywhere.
I can’t find my mask but I have another good idea.I have another toy.

Edited

Tonight I played puzzle. But one puzzle piece was gone. But me and my dad Dr Smile (my dads name) were happy. The puzzle had 100 pieces. I played made/ built the puzzle with my dad. My dad Dr Smile likes my puzzles. Tonight I ate beans, pork, carrots and rice. I think they were so delicious.

Make sentences
I like car and I like truck. –> I like cars and trucks
I study English because my English was is so/very/really bad.
I drive the car so I can go to everywhere. –> I drive the car to go everywhere 
I can’t couldn’t find my transformers mask but I have another good idea.I have another fun toy.