OpenF2F Class Notes 30th November (Celeste)[2]***

Homework: Review the story below. Be prepared to retell this story in your next class.

Use these words in your story:

get dressed/get dressed up, dress it up, stumble across, hidden gem, go full out, hold sth back, organically/naturally, jukebox, reunion, era

Original

In this Halloween, I had a reunion with my friends in Mansion which is a hidden gem in Shanghai. I love that club so much because I think the Mansion is my jukebox. They are always playing the music from my era. You could see the bartender dressed the bar up with monsters. I got dressed up as Joker from a movie Suicide Squad and we just go full out to the club to celebrate my favorite holiday. When I dressed up, I can totally, organically to dance. I don’t have to hold myself back because I can feel more confident. I felt when I get makeup I can be myself so it gives me power. In that day, I can stumbled across Harley Quinn everywhere.

Edited

This past Halloween, I had a reunion with my friends in Mansion which is a hidden gem in Shanghai. I love that club so much because I think the Mansion is my jukebox. They are always playing the music from my era. The bartender dressed the bar up with decorations like monsters. I got dressed up as Joker who is from the movie, Suicide Squad, and we just went full ***out at the club*** to celebrate my favorite holiday. When I am dressed up, I can totally, organically dance. I don’t have to hold myself back because I feel more confident. I feel when I get made up I can be myself so it gives me power. That night, I stumbled across Harley Quinn everywhere.