F2F Class Notes (Jacob) [S]
Homework
Write about the outcome of your negotiations with the travel agency.
Vocabulary
Cooperate/Cooperation/Collaborate/Collaboration – working together
Careful not to confuse Corporation & cooperate
Corporate trip –Ā going on a trip with your company
Speaking exercise
OriginalĀ
It doesn’t totally fail he gave us opportunity to revise our project. The thing is, their company organize tourist groups about 6000 people to Toronto, Canada. Our brand company of Canada has very heavy pressure to motivate the local trade. Because this year, the quantity of the trade is not very high. So they want the people of this group can pay the goods by our union pay cards. There are not so many places can use U.P. in Canada.
The rules of our marketing campaign are so complicated. The tourists must buy things of 1000 so he can get another coupon of $15.
What I can do is to give him some money of corporate like 50,000rmb.
Student Edits
It doesn’t totally fail.Ā Because he gave usĀ an opportunity to revise our project. The thing is, their company organized tourist groups about 6000 people to Toronto, Canada. Our brand company of Canada has very heavy pressure to motivate the local trade. Because this year, the quantity of the trade is not very high. So they want the people of this group can pay the goods by our union pay cards. There are not so many places can use U.P. in Canada.
The rules of our marketing campaigns are so complicated. The tourists must buy things of $1000,Ā then he can get another coupon of $50.
I can do very little to help him, justĀ can do is to give him some money of corporation, like 50,000rmb and push the staff of brand company to explore additional options
Final Edit
ItĀ didn’t totally fail because he gave usĀ an opportunity to revise our project. The thing is, their company organizesĀ tourist groupsĀ of about 6000 people to Toronto, Canada. Our brand company of branch inĀ Canada has very heavy pressure to motivate stimulateĀ the local trade. Because this year the quantity of the trade is not very high. So, they want the people of this group toĀ can pay the buyĀ goods by usingĀ our union pay cards. There are not so many places that youĀ can use U.P. in Canada.
The rules of our marketing campaigns are so complicated. The tourists mustĀ first buy things of worth/valued atĀ $1000 and then theyĀ can get coupon of $50.
I can do very little to help him, just giveĀ him some money for us to cooperate, like 50,000rmb and push the staff of ourĀ branchĀ to explore additional options.
Grammar
They must first buy things worth $1000,then they can get a coupon of $50.
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