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Your Original Email

[Business writing: I want this be professional and concise]

Tagline： Most water purifier sold in China are under-the-sink system as it satisfies the room layout of most Chines families
1. Under-the-sink water purifiers take up majority of the POU purifier market as most Chinese families have sink cabinets, making purifiers installed under the sink more room-saving
2. Countertop water purifiers, as a niche market, are often installed in living room or on home bar counter, therefore have high requirement for product appearance design
3. With consumption upgrade and growing demand of customized designing, countertop purifiers market size is expected to grow, but unlikely to take over the share of under-the-sink purifier
“… Going forward, both increasing customized demand and development of technology will promote countertop purifier market, but under-the-sink purifiers will remain as the mainstream market in China …”
Supply chain manager, xx company

Your Edited Email

[Business writing: I want this be professional and concise]

Tagline： Most water purifiers sold in China are under-the-sink systems as they fit the room layout of most Chines families
1. Under-the-sink water purifiers take up the majority of the POU purifier market as most Chinese families have sink cabinets, making purifiers installed under the sink more room-saving.
2. Countertop water purifiers, as a niche market, are often installed in living rooms or on home bar counters, therefore have high requirements for product aesthetics.
3. With consumption upgrade and growing demand of customized designs, the countertop purifier market size is expected to grow, but unlikely to take over the share of under-the-sink purifiers.
“… Going forward, both increasing customized demand and development of technology will promote countertop purifier market, but under-the-sink purifiers will remain as the mainstream market in China …”
Supply chain manager, xx company