Email Service Notes (Jesse)

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My favorite means of getting information

In nowadays, there are a lot of ways to get information, and we can get information from newspapers, magazines,books, internet, TV, radio or other people. Those ways all have their merits and demerits. Newspapers, magazines and books are the traditional ways to get information, but with the development of the times, the newspapers and magazines are almost leave the stage of history. I like reading, and I think why books are popular in nowadays because we can get knowledge in system and that’s the internet can’t give. Internet is popular now because we can get information immediately and we just need to click the mouse, the information will show quickly. I think this is the biggest advantage of internet, and we also can search a lot of informations that we want. Through TV and radio we also can get information immediately, but they are a little bit passive, and they all under the control of government. Between of those ways, my favorite means of getting information is from the internet. Because I can get information immediately and just search I want.

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My favorite means of getting information

Nowadays, there are a lot of ways to get information, including from newspapers, magazines,books, the internet / online, TV, radio or other people. Those ways all have their merits and demerits / disadvantages. Newspapers, magazines and books are the traditional ways to get information, but with the development of technology / with the changing of times, newspapers and magazines have almost left the stage of history / are almost obsolete. I like reading, and I think why / the reason books are popular nowadays / these days is because we can get knowledge in a systematic way and that’s something the internet can’t give. The internet is popular now because we can get information immediately at / with the click of a mouse and the information will show quickly / will be displayed quickly. I think this is the biggest advantage of the internet, as well as the fact that we can search for a lot of information that we want. Through TV and radio we also can get information immediately, but they are a little bit passive, and they are all under the control of the government (In China this is true but not the west). Out of those ways, my favorite means of getting information is from the internet because I can search for what I want and get it immediately.