Email Service Notes (Celeste)

Writing exercise

A: Oh my god! What did you do to yourself!
B: Donā€™t be panic. Itā€™s just a piece of cake in the medical field.
A: You told me that you would have a lazer something on your face, but now you seem like an injured solider whoā€™s just been carried back to the camp from the front line.
B: Thatā€™s funny. I heard of liposuction all the time like itā€™s something normal and the doctors here told me I could go back home after this tiny operation on the same day.
A: Tiny operation? Look at your swollen face!
B: I did this because I donā€™t want to let you down.
A: What?
B: Remember? Last time when you saw me you asked me why I hadnā€™t lost any weight.
A: Iā€™m sorry. I didnā€™t mean to hit you where it hurt. I mentioned that only because you always told me that you were playing badminton.
B: Itā€™s not all about you. What you said was just the last straw. I always wanted to lose weight, but donā€™t know why nothing seemed help. I really wanted to go that extra mile. Now I finally got around to doing this. Donā€™t make me feel bad about it.
A: Well. Is it expensive?
B: That goes without saying, otherwise no one in the world is over weight now.
A: Thatā€™s not true. People donā€™t do that for many reasons. Have you told your husband?
B: No. Heā€™s such a stick in the mud. In my plan, I come here, pay for the surgery, make the difference and go back home without being noticed. But now it seems I was too naive and innocent to believe the sales person from this orthopedics hospital.
A: Yes, you were. I will stay in shape and never do things like this

EditedĀ 

A: Oh my god! What did you do to yourself!?
B: Donā€™t panic. Itā€™s just a piece of cake***What does this mean? in the medical field.
A: You told me that you would have a lazer something on your face, but now you lookĀ like an injured solider whoā€™s just been carried back to the camp from the front line.
B: Thatā€™s funny. I hear aboutĀ liposuction all the time like itā€™s something normal and the doctors here told me I could go back home after this tiny operation on the same day.
A: Tiny operation? Look at your swollen face!
B: I did this because I didnā€™t want to let you down.
A: What?
B: Remember? Last time when you saw me you asked me why I hadnā€™t lost any weight.
A: Iā€™m sorry. I didnā€™t mean to hit you where it hurt. I mentioned that only because you always told me that you were playing badminton.
B: Itā€™s not all about you. What you said was just the last straw. I always wanted to lose weight, but donā€™t know why nothing seemedĀ to help. I really wanted to go that extra mile. Now I finally got around to doing this. Donā€™t make me feel bad about it.
A: Well… WasĀ it expensive?
B: That goes without saying, otherwise no one in the worldĀ would be overweight now.
A: Thatā€™s not true. People donā€™t do that for many reasons. Have you told your husband?
B: No. Heā€™s such a stick in the mud. My plan was toĀ I come here, pay for the surgery, get the surgery,Ā and go back home without being noticed. But now it seems I was too naive and innocent to believe the sales person from this orthopedics ***(this means treatment or study of bones)Ā hospital.
A: Yes, you were. I will stay in shape and never doĀ anything like this.