Email Service Notes (Celeste)
Writing exercise
A: Oh my god! What did you do to yourself!
B: Donāt be panic. Itās just a piece of cake in the medical field.
A: You told me that you would have a lazer something on your face, but now you seem like an injured solider whoās just been carried back to the camp from the front line.
B: Thatās funny. I heard of liposuction all the time like itās something normal and the doctors here told me I could go back home after this tiny operation on the same day.
A: Tiny operation? Look at your swollen face!
B: I did this because I donāt want to let you down.
A: What?
B: Remember? Last time when you saw me you asked me why I hadnāt lost any weight.
A: Iām sorry. I didnāt mean to hit you where it hurt. I mentioned that only because you always told me that you were playing badminton.
B: Itās not all about you. What you said was just the last straw. I always wanted to lose weight, but donāt know why nothing seemed help. I really wanted to go that extra mile. Now I finally got around to doing this. Donāt make me feel bad about it.
A: Well. Is it expensive?
B: That goes without saying, otherwise no one in the world is over weight now.
A: Thatās not true. People donāt do that for many reasons. Have you told your husband?
B: No. Heās such a stick in the mud. In my plan, I come here, pay for the surgery, make the difference and go back home without being noticed. But now it seems I was too naive and innocent to believe the sales person from this orthopedics hospital.
A: Yes, you were. I will stay in shape and never do things like this
EditedĀ
A: Oh my god! What did you do to yourself!?
B: Donāt panic. Itās just a piece of cake***What does this mean? in the medical field.
A: You told me that you would have a lazer something on your face, but now you lookĀ like an injured solider whoās just been carried back to the camp from the front line.
B: Thatās funny. I hear aboutĀ liposuction all the time like itās something normal and the doctors here told me I could go back home after this tiny operation on the same day.
A: Tiny operation? Look at your swollen face!
B: I did this because I didnāt want to let you down.
A: What?
B: Remember? Last time when you saw me you asked me why I hadnāt lost any weight.
A: Iām sorry. I didnāt mean to hit you where it hurt. I mentioned that only because you always told me that you were playing badminton.
B: Itās not all about you. What you said was just the last straw. I always wanted to lose weight, but donāt know why nothing seemedĀ to help. I really wanted to go that extra mile. Now I finally got around to doing this. Donāt make me feel bad about it.
A: Well… WasĀ it expensive?
B: That goes without saying, otherwise no one in the worldĀ would be overweight now.
A: Thatās not true. People donāt do that for many reasons. Have you told your husband?
B: No. Heās such a stick in the mud. My plan was toĀ I come here, pay for the surgery, get the surgery,Ā and go back home without being noticed. But now it seems I was too naive and innocent to believe the sales person from this orthopedics ***(this means treatment or study of bones)Ā hospital.
A: Yes, you were. I will stay in shape and never doĀ anything like this.
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