Demo Class Notes (Esther – Georges)

Vocabulary

Embassy-  the place that represents your country in another country.

e.g. When I lost my passport, I had to go to the Chinese embassy in Paris.

Grammar

Pronunciation

Itinerary- ai-ti-nuh-reh-ree

Original

I’m gonna tell you my vacation experience, I went to the Uk for my degree for one and during the one year study, and I went to some part of Europe for brief time for holidays. I went to France and Germany, and the unlucky thing I lost my visa in the subway, it’s unforgettable in my lifetime. I didnt notice it until i got back to the hotel. So I went to the EMBASSY  and asked for them if I could get a new one, but they didn’t help me a lot. I have another plan after this trip to France, I have my own flight one day later, so I went to Italy to continue my trip and I have my passport. So when I get there I am ok for the three-day trip to Italy. It’s the first time I travelled so I went to from Italy to France on an overnight bus and also I lost my visa so I cannot go to the UK, luckily for me, I asked my friends if they have some people they are familiar with in France. Luckily, finally, I met with someone I know.

Corrected

I’m gonna tell you about my vacation experience, I studied in the UK for a one year Master’s degree, and during my time there, I went to some parts of Europe for a brief holiday. I went to France and Germany, and one very unlucky thing that happened to me was that I lost my visa in the subway, it’s really an unforgettable moment in my lifetime. I didn’t notice it was lost until i got back to the hotel. So I went to the EMBASSY  and asked them if I could get a new one, but they didn’t help me much because they didn’t tell me I would have to reapply for my visa in France. So I went to Italy with my passport, only to find out that I would have to go back to France to get it done.  Because I had no Visa to enter the UK, I had to go to France from Italy on an overnight bus. Because it’s the first time I traveled alone I was nervous and a bit scared so I asked my friends if they knew some people who could help me in France. Luckily, I met someone I knew and everything worked out just fine.

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