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i went to japan for twice and the one leave me the deepest impression was the one i went to last year and i went to Osaka in winter so it is snowy there and it was the first time i have seen to many snow and everything around me is covered in snow and i really enjoyed it. it is amazing to ski up from the mountain to down.

i have been to japan twice and the one left me the deepest impression was the one i went on last year. i went to Osaka in winter so it was snowy there and it was the first time i have seen so much snow and everything around me was covered in / with snow and i really enjoyed it. it is amazing to ski down from the mountain.

i have been / have visited / have taken trips to japan twice / several times / a number of times / 1-2  times / a few times and the one which / that left me the deepest impression / impressed me the most / remember the most / was most memorable was the one i went on last year. i went to Osaka in winter so / therefore / which means it was snowy there and it was the first time i have seen / have experienced so much / such heavy / such a huge amount of snow and everything around me was (fully / completely / totally / 100%) covered in / with snow and i really enjoyed it / I’m was really keen / I was in favor of / I was a huge fan of it/ I was really into it. It is amazing / incredible / fantastic / marvelous  to ski down from the mountain.

yesterday you had a birthday.
how was your birthday party?

past tense 

chinglish / for / to / on … 

I went on a trip
I am on holiday.

for some time / times 
eg. I have been here for 10 minutes
eg2. I have been to Australia 3 times

I am studying in high school which is located in Shanghai. My favorite subjects are Geography and Physics, though Physics is a little hard for me. I am also involved in many school communities such as Psychology group, model group and Aerobics team. Actually I have gained a sense of achievement through these activities, and I got some awards such as ….（這裏似乎少了些什麼）.It seems that my efforts have paid off. The events that I have participated in and interests that I have, have broadened my horizons and expanded my mind. It also offered me a lot of chances to mingle with those who share the same interests.

My experience as an exchange student in American and Australia has triggered my expectation to study aboard and made know there are many possibilities. During my time in the USA, I visited lots of museums and exhibitions and also took some meaningful courses e.g. urban planing and fine arts. Later on when I was in Australia I was in a home stay program with a local family. The intercultural experience makes me have a lot of friends and some of friends are my pen-pals. I also make lots of friends in the local school and some of them become my pen-friends today and I am still keep in touch with them.

Due to the exchange experience. I was so interested in Urban Planning Design and Management. I would like to choose Urban Planning Design and Management as my major. I was three years age when I first showed my interest in Architect. Luckily, I have seen quite a few masterpieces of Zaha Hadid, the pioneer architect of Deconstructivism. I than visited some world-class landmarks which were designed by her, and I got plenty of inspirations. I have always acquiring knowledge with regard to building, urban management and fine arts so as to be a qualified urban designer. To achieve my goal am suppose to apply for the program provided by UCL a world class college. Witch is best known for it Urban Planning major. Besides, the prime location of UCL is appealing to me, since I can get a taste of historic London. Hopefully I can integrate my aesthetic appreciation and the skills I am about to learn in order to make some contribution to this area.

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