VIP Class Notes (Vicki)

Today we watched videos and the student described what he saw in the videos.

Then we read through the Diary of a Wimpy Kid and worked through the new vocabs

A: Tell me about what you just watched

Jerry want to go into the ship. Tom doesn’t want he go in it. Tom used the line to put on the ship and Jerry goes in it and Tom put out the line and Jerry is afraid and Jerry comes on the ship. Something go up and Jerry is on the ship. Tom is in the ship and Jerry use Tom’s tail put the circle together. Tom think something in the water and he fly into the sea. Jerry go into the chair and see some white paper and Tom go into the ship and he sees some people is see the paper. He put the scarf in Jerry’s body and Tom go away. Jerry run, Tom catch jerry.

Revised :
Jerry wants to go into the ship. Tom doesn’t want him to go in it. Tom used the line to put on the ship and Jerry goes in it. Tom puts out the line and Jerry is afraid and Jerry comes on the ship. Something goes up and Jerry is on the ship. Tom is in the ship and Jerry uses Tom’s tail to put the circle together. Tom thinks something is in the water and he flies into the sea. Jerry goes into the chair and sees some white paper and Tom goes into the ship and he sees some people is see the paper. He puts the scarf on Jerry’s body and Tom goes away. Jerry runs, Tom catches Jerry.

Tom’s cousin comes the house and his cousin is very afraid of mouse. And Tom put a toy mouse to run and his cousin see is afraid and fly to the wall. Really Jerry comes out. He sees Tom’s cousin and think it is Tom. Tom’s cousin go on the wall. Tom’s cousin becomes like water in a hole.

Revised :
Tom’s cousin comes the house and his cousin is very afraid of mouse. And Tom puts a toy mouse to run around and his cousin is afraid when he sees it and flies to the wall. The real Jerry comes out. He sees Tom’s cousin and thinks it is Tom. Tom’s cousin goes on the wall when he sees Jerry. Tom’s cousin becomes like water and goes into a hole.

Jerry run and Tom always catch Jerry. Jerry into a bottle and Tom run away and Jerry go out. But Jerry can’t see his legs. Jerry put his hand into the bottle and he can’t see his hand. Jerry goes into the bottle. All body can’t see Jerry. Jerry goes in a table, he puts a vegetable and eats. Jerry things is good and Jerry eat all the vegetables

Revised:
Jerry runs and Tom always catches Jerry. Jerry goes into a bottle and Tom runs away and Jerry goes out. But Jerry can’t see his legs. Jerry puts his hand into the bottle and he can’t see his hand. Jerry goes into the bottle. Nobody can see Jerry. Jerry goes in a table, he pulls out a vegetable and eats it. Jerry thinks it is good and Jerry eats all the vegetables

Tom put a drink like milk in a pan. Jerry put the glass bottle in the pan. Jerry goes in Tom’s head and he eats the nice things too. Tom put Jerry into the hole and put something in the hole, and Jerry goes out and eat the good things too. And Tom open the wall and use the key to lock it. Tom put the nice things in his hand and Jerry goes out. He can’t see Jerry and he drink all the good things.

Revised:
Tom puts a drink like milk in a pan. Jerry puts the glass bottle in the pan. Jerry goes onto Tom’s head and he eats the nice things too. Tom puts Jerry into the hole and puts something in the hole, and Jerry goes out and eats the good things too. And Tom opens the wall and uses the key to lock it. Tom puts the nice things in his hand and Jerry goes out. He can’t see Jerry and he drinks all the good things.

Vocabulary

deflated – no air in the ball

safe – 保险箱

hallway – 走廊

circling – draw circles

weapon – something to fight with

appropriate – suitable or fit

whatever – 无所谓

motorized – has an engine/motor

Write one sentence for each new vocab