VIP Class Notes (Phoebe)

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Original:

Did you watch Liverpool against Barcelona last night? Which team do you support?

Recently I read news online, I saw very beautiful scenary in Gansu. In the past I have been to Gansu but I don’t know this place. I feel it’s a shame because I went to some famous scenaries I thought it’s not attractive, like XX Lake, the lake is very dirty. When I look into the lake, the lake is dark, but that lake is very clear. Since few people know the place, the lake look like heaven. It can make me feel relaxed. If I have a chance, I will go there. I went there by plane, I ordered from Chunqiu website. I stayed there for a week, I thought food is ok, I am not a fan of food. When I went there I know a famous place is called Yueya Spring, it’s a 人工 lake in the desert, however in my opinion it’s ok. When it comes to dusk, the colour of sunshine is very beautiful and feels warm.

With corrections:

Did you watch Liverpool against Barcelona last night?  the football game between Liverpool and Barcelona? Yes I did, and the score was 1:1/even or game was a 1:1 draw/tie in the end.

Recently I read news online, I saw very beautiful scenary in Gansu. Recently I saw very beautiful scenary in Gangu when I read the news online. In the past I have been to Gansu but I don’t didn’t know this place. I feel it’s a shame because I went to some famous scenaries signtseeing places which/that I thought it’s were not attractive, like such as XX Lake, since the lake is was very dirty. When I looked into the XX Lake, the lake is was dark water had a dark colour, but that lake on the news is seems very clear. Since few people know the place, the lake still looks like heaven. It seemed very relaxing. It can make me feel relaxed. If I have a chance, I will go there.

I went there by plane, I ordered booked plane tickets from/on Chunqiu website. I stayed there for a week, I thought food is was ok, I am not a fan of food foodie. When I went there I know There was a famous place is called Yueya Spring, it’s an artificial lake in the desert, however in my opinion it’s ok. When it comes came to dusk, the colour of sunshine is was very beautiful and feels felt warm/the warm sunlight shining on the sand looked very beautiful. 

Vocabulary

go up the mountains -> climb the mountains

Grammar

I support Liverpool/I am a Liverpool fan

Who scored last night? Griezmann scored a goal in the match.

France won the match/France beat Germany

France won by six goals to two against Hungary.

Pronunciation

artificial