VIP Class Notes (Nate) [S]

Because Sandwiches are yummy. Because pizzas are yummy. My favourite pizza is fruit pizza. My favourite drinks are cola, because juice tastes good.

My favourite books are the magic school-bus books. I like them because the books are exciting and fun. I like books about. My favourite animal is the lion and the giraffe. Because the lion is very big and loud. Because the Giraffe is very cute.

I wear school clothes. I wear a shirt and pants and shoes, my shoes colour is blue, red, black, and white. Yes, I like school, because school is very very big. School is fun.

I have a mom/dad young sister a grandfather/grandmother/ uncle/cousin.

I go to school in the morning, I go to school at 7am.

I don’t like fish because fish is gross and slimy. My favourite person is my mom and dad because my mom and my dad very nice. Today I woke up and and ate breakfast then, I  go to school and then I go home.

CORRECTED VERSION

Because Sandwiches are yummy. Because (p)izzas are yummy. My favourite pizza is fruit pizza. My favourite drinks are cola, because juice tastes good.

My favourite books are the magic school-bus books. I like them because the books are exciting and fun. I like books about. My favourite animal is the lion and the giraffe. Because the lion is very big and loud. Because the (The) giraffe is (also) very cute.

I wear school clothes. I wear a shirt(,) and pants and shoes, my shoes colour(s) is (are) blue, red, black, and white. Yes, I like school, because (my) school is very very big. School is fun.

I have a mom, dad, young (little) sister a grandfather, grandmother, uncle, and cousin.

I go to school in the morning, I go to school at 7am.

I don’t like fish because fish is (are) gross and slimy. My favourite person (people) is (are) my mom and dad because my mom and my dad (are) (very )nice. Today I woke up and and ate breakfast then, I  go (went) to school and then I go (went) home.

Vocabulary

Loud– A sound that usually comes from someone or something. “That car as very “loud”. 

Grammar

[Are] [Some foods “are” better than other foods.]

[About]  [“I like books “about” animals. ]