VIP Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Vocabulary

1.lucky draw= 抽奖
ex: we had a lucky draw yesterday and we got the drink for free!

2. promotion= 促销活动
ex: there’s a promotion for buying milk, buy one get one free!
ex: the car is on promotion, you can buy it for a cheaper price.

Writing exercise

I think it’s harder to be a mom, because moms must get money to live and help you to study in a good school. But the teenager just need to study hard, don’t need to work for money, so it’s harder to be a mom.

I think it’s hard to be a teenager, because we must get up a seven o’clock and we must arrive school before eight o’clock. In this time we should wash face, brush teeth, eat breakfast… after school we must do a lot of homework.

Revised

I think it’s harder to be a mom, because moms must provide for the family and help you with your studying. However, the teenager just needs to study hard, he/she doesn’t need to work for money, so it’s harder to be a mom.

I think it’s hard to be a teenager, because we must get up at seven o’clock and we must arrive at school before eight o’clock. During this period, we should wash our face, brush our teeth, eat breakfast… after school we must do a lot of homework.