VIP Class Notes (Lily) [S]

if you could travel to anywhere with anyone, where and who would it be? Why?

Grammar

in +month
ex: I will be going to a new school in September.
ex: My birthday is in November.

a bit smaller than me –> a bit younger than me
3 grade-4 grade– > grade 3- grade 4

Vocabulary

1.senior (noun)= people who are older or people who have more experience
ex: He is a senior in the company, he worked here for 10 years.
ex: We should take care of the senior people in the family.

2. seniority= status obtained as the result of a person’s length of service,
ex: People with higher seniority get to choose their working schedule first. If you are a newbie in the company, you choose your working schedule after everyone else.

3. devoted= put your whole heart into something
ex: Tommy is devoted to teaching, all his students love him.

4. goosebumps
ex: when you get really scared, you will have goosebumps.

5. spill = accidentally dropped water on something/someone
ex: I accidentally spilled water on myself, now I have to change.

6. electronic device= phone, computer, ipad, tablets
ex: We shouldn’t bring expensive electronic devices such as iPads, computers to the summer camp.

Tell me about your future as a diplomat? What do you have to do? How much money do you make? Where would you live? Tell me everything you can find!

I think my future as a diplomat will be very busy, because I need to speech to others and talk to a group of people which I don’t know them. I think i have to make my English better. In my opinion, I don’t think my English is well enough as a diplomat. I also need to try to speak in front of many people. I think I’m a bit afraid of that right now. I think i need to be braver and more confident. I don’t know how much money a diplomat make, the answer I found in the internet said “sone diplomats earn a lot of money, some of them earn just a little.” When you travel to another country, you need to speak to others not just in one day.

A diplomat is about his country. A diplomat shows the country is strong or not. Developing country diplomats sometimes they’re good. If the diplomat of a country is good at speaking, that means the country is strong.

Revised

I think my future as a diplomat will be very busy, because I need to make speeches to others and talk to a group of people which I don’t know them. I think i have to improve my English better. In my opinion, I don’t think my English is well enough for a diplomat. I also need to try to speak in front of many people (big audience). I think I’m a bit afraid of that right now. I think i need to be more brave and more confident. I don’t know how much money a diplomat makes, the answer I found on the internet says “some diplomats earn a lot of money whereas some of them earn just a little.” When you travel to another country, you need to speak to others not only for one day.

A diplomat is devoted/ related to his country. A diplomat reflects the power of the country is strong or not. Some of the diplomats from developing countries are good. If the diplomat of a country is good at speaking, that means the country is strong.

I went to a summer camp, it is called “the talent diplomat summer camp”. I used to think it’s very interesting and it can improve my ability at English, in fact, we don’t speak English there. I don’t think know why it is called the talent diplomat summer camp. We only have one English lesson less than a day, the more ridiculous is it’s for playing games. I think many people there is not good at English, it’s at NanJing. Most of the students there are from NanJing, most of them is suck at English. They can read difficult as different. I don’t how can they read that. I go there with one of my classmates, we lived there for ten days. He brought a kindle but somebody spilled water on it, and then it doesn’t work. All in all, I think it’s wasting time going to this summer camp.

Revised

I went to a summer camp, it is called “the talent diplomat summer camp”. I used to think it’s very interesting and it can improve my English ability, in fact, we didn’t speak English there. I don’t think know why it is called the talent diplomat summer camp. We only had one English lesson for less than a day, the most ridiculous thing is that we always played games. I think many people there were not good at English, the camp is located in NanJing. Most of the students there are from NanJing, most of them is suck at English. They can read difficult as different. I don’t how can they read that. I went there with one of my classmates, we lived there for ten days. He brought a kindle but somebody spilled water on it, and then it stopped working. All in all (Overall), I think it’s wasting time going to this summer camp.