VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

TOPIC: Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

Nowadays individuals are take more concentrate on how to manage their money. From my perspective, adults should learn how to make a budget by annual, and then allocated in monthly. In this essay I will suggest this views in details.

Learning by example is a quite good method to step forward. When we at school we were taught some basic arithmetic budget-planing which is such a useful direction for your finical management. Making a restrict consumer spending plan for a year is deliberate to spend money more efficient. Listing the fundamental living cost, such as household costs, education costs, and social networking etc. Whereas, it is hard to follow your budget at all. Some adults were paid for everything during their childhood, this means they probably could not know about manage money. That will become a dilemma start-up in money management.

Further more, we should consider the finical investment programs.Taking advantage of finical investment programs has been being an important finical activities in the modern life. intend to get more disposable income learn some fundamental finical knowledge. On the other hand, it is highly necessarily save some disposable income for accidental situation. Dispact the facts, investment still have the risks nowadays. We should consider this investment as an 50% chance of additional income. Putting highly district budget on it.

On the whole, it is important to advent the ideas of manage money as your daily life.

TOPIC: Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

Nowadays individuals are concentrating more / putting more emphasis / focusing more on / prioritizing how to manage their money and investments / assets. From my perspective, adults should learn how to make a budget annually, and then allocated monthly. In this essay I will suggest this view in detail / clearly / specifically.

Learning by example is quite a good method to step forward and make progress / improve yourself / make a difference to your financial situation (2 ideas). When we were at school we were taught some basic arithmetic budget-planning which is such a useful direction for your financial management. Making a restrictive / restricted consumer spending plan for a year is intended to spend money more efficiently. Listing the fundamental living costs, such as household costs, education costs, and networking / socialising etc. In contrast, for most adults it is hard to follow their budget in the majority of cases, and some adults had everything paid for by their parents during their childhood, which means they probably don’t know about managing money. As a result, a dilemma will be created / formed relating to money management.

Furthermore / On top of this / In addition to this / Additionally / Another important factor is that, we should consider the financial investment programs and take advantage of them has been being an important financial activities in the modern life. Intend to get more disposable income from learning some fundamental finical knowledge. In my opinion, it is crucial for those looking to build a healthy financial portfolio to place their disposable income into projects and programs such as investment activities in order to grow their wealth even further. On the other hand, it is highly necessarily to save some disposable income for emergencies or sudden unexpected expenses. Despite the facts, investment still has a lot of risk nowadays / these days / in this age / in the modern age / in the modern world / at this point in time / in the 21st century. We should consider this investment as a 50% chance of additional potential income, putting relatively conservative budget on it.

try to use 2 ideas / points / adjective / verbs / nouns for each sentence
eg. I like coffee because it’s bitter and interesting.

be careful with adverbs – most add “ly” and put them after or before the verb. 
eg. I am quickly running out of patience / I run fast / I quickly went to the shops / I basically don’t like tea 

Think of simple sentences that you already know – help these to prove your complex sentences are correct. 

Try not to use very common conjunction phrases

They paid for everything for me < > I had everything paid for me by them

On the whole, it is important to advent the ideas of manage money as your daily life.

I have money whereas you don’t = but

I do it monthly / yearly / annually 

intend – your motivation was clear
deliberate – not an accident