VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Read page 91 – 95 of Diary Of A Wimpy Kid – and tell me about it next class. Tell me a story with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

In the summer at noon, a boy named Peter wears a pair of blue trousers and a green t-shirt is walking on the path. He wants to go home. Peter falls on the path so his hand hurts. Then, he stand up and very sad and go to a fountain, washes his hand, but he doesn’t feel better and then he goes to the hospital and see the doctor. the doctor puts some medicine on his hand and puts the bandage on it. Then he feels better. Peter learn if he hurts he must see the doctor. Now he walks to home.

In the summer at noon / in the afternoon / one afternoon / one day in the afternoon, a boy named Peter, wearing a pair of blue trousers / pants and a green t-shirt, is walking on the path. He wants to go home but he falls on the path so he hurts his hand. Then, he stands up and is very sad and goes to a fountain (because he wants) to wash his hand, but he doesn’t feel better so he goes to the hospital and sees / to see the doctor. The doctor puts some medicine on his hand and puts the bandage on it. Then he feels better. Peter learns if he is hurt / he has hurt himself he must see the doctor. After that, he walks home / goes home.

hurt – teng (v)
hurt – shou shang (v)
eg. My hand hurts = teng
eg2. I hurt my hand = shou shang