VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

In year 1943, there was a widow named Rachel who loved to collect china. One day when she woke up she saw a gargantuan china in front of her. She stood up and checked the china. She found so much popcorn  in there. When she wanted to get the popcorn, the edge of the china hurt her and made her bleed. She cried “this china is so terrible I’m going to break it”. After she said that, she kicked the china out of solar system. This story tell us do not give a widow any china.

In year 1943, there was a widow named Rachel who loved to collect china. One day when she woke up she saw a gargantuan china bottle in front of her. She stood up and checked the china, and found so much popcorn inside / in it. When she wanted to get / take the popcorn out, the edge of the china hurt / cut her and made her bleed. She cried “this china is so terrible I’m going to break it”. After she said that, she kicked the china out of the solar system. This story tell us do not give a widow any china.

Vocabulary

bleed – bledbled

gobbledygook – something you can’t understand because it’s really weird English

bamboozle – to totally confuse or trick someone

dillydally – to waste time

bonkers – crazy