VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Writing exercise
On January 1, 2019, I ran 10 kilometers race, and this was my first time do this. This race was organized by JingāAn district government which called JingāAn New Year run. Our company was (sponsor) of this activity, so a lot of our companyās employees entered this competition. There were two types of races, 5KM and 10KM. 5KM was from Jingāan park to Shanghai train station, and 10KM was from Jingāan park to Daning Lingshi park. 10KMās race time was 2 hours, and 5KMās was one hour. Between this time, the traffic was controlled. Social cars and pedestrian were canāt get in the road of race. All the traffic lights were green, and this was my first time met this situation, it was memorable. When we finished this race, everyone got a big of gifts. There were a (medal), two bottles of mineral water and other small things. There were 4,800 people took part in this race. In 1KM, the champion of women spend 34 minuets, the men was 31 minutes. My mark was incomparable to them, but in our companyās marketing team, I was second, and the prize was a bathroom heater.
Iām very happy that I can have this experience, and I will keep running in the future.
On January 1, 2019, I ran a 10 kilometer race, and this was my first time doing this / to do this. This race was organized by JingāAn district government and (it)Ā wasĀ called JingāAn New Year run. Our company was a sponsor of this activity, so a lot of our companyās employees entered this competition. There were two types of races, 5KM and 10KM. 5KM was from Jingāan park to Shanghai train station, and 10KM was from Jingāan park to Daning Lingshi park. the 10KM race time was 2 hours, and the 5KMĀ one was one hour. Between this time, the traffic was controlled, roads were closed and pedestriansĀ couldn’t get into the road of the race / race track. All the traffic lights were green, and this was my first time to meet this situation so it was memorable. When we finished this race, everyone got a bag of gifts / a gift-bag. There were a medal, two bottles of mineral water and other small things. There were 4,800 people to take / taking part in this race. In the 10KM race, the champion of women spent 34 minutes, the men was 31 minutes. My time couldn’t compare to theirs / was incomparable to them, but in our companyās marketing team, I was second / I came second, and the prize was a bathroom heater.
Iām very happy that I can have this experience, and I will keep running in the future.
Vocabulary
current affairs – things happening in the news and world today
big deal – positive
eg. The meeting today was a big deal
serious – negative
eg. I had a serious conversation with him
recommend – tui jian
participate / take part in – can jia
champion / winner – 1st placeĀ
runner-up – 2nd place
2nd runner-up – 3rd place
I came 1st place so I got a gold medal. I am the champion. \
cumulative / accumulateĀ
eg. the income tax in China is cumulative
Grammar
to run a race is hard.
running a race is hard.
I like to run / I like runningĀ
the baby is 2 years old.
it is a 2 year old baby.
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