VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Vocabulary

I have a student. She is called Yoyo. = I have a student who is called Yoyo.

Introduction
who? – Robert and Rillk, 2 boys, friends
when? – one sunny day in the morning
where? – at a running race
Body
what happened? – Robert was very fast but Rillk was a little bit slow because Robert is taller than Rillk. Robert’s mum and dad said they will give him some ice cream if he wins. Rillk’s mum and dad said they will give him 3 dinosaurs or 3 new toy guns. Rillk tried very hard but he couldn’t win.
Conclusion
learn? Robert learned if he wins, he can eat 100 ice creams.
feel? – Rillk is sad because didn’t win
and then? – Robert wins, gets ice cream, goes home.

Finished Story

One sunny day in the morning, there were 2 boys who were friends called Robert and Rillk. They were at a running race.

Robert was very fast but Rillk was a little bit slow because Robert is taller than Rillk. Robert’s mum and dad said they will give him some ice cream if he wins. Rillk’s mum and dad said they will give him 3 dinosaurs or 3 new toy guns. Rillk tried very hard but he couldn’t win.

Finally, Robert wins the race, and he gets ice cream from his mum and dad so he is very happy. Rillk loses so he is very sad. Robert learns that if he wins, he can get 100 ice creams.

Introduction
who? – a boy called Sorry
when? – one morning
where? – at home

Body
what happened? – He saw a burglar and the burglar went to the police station and told the police that a boy took his iPhone and coat. The policeman said, I will catch you because you are a burglar.

Conclusion
learn? – the burglar learned he can’t be a burglar because the policeman will catch him
feel? – the burglar felt very sad and cried. the policeman felt annoyed.
and then? the burglar went to jail

Finished Story

One morning, there was a boy called Sorry. He was at home and a burglar stole his iPhone and coat. He saw the burglar and the burglar went to the police station and told the police that a boy took his iPhone and coat. The policeman said, I will catch you because you are the burglar.

The burglar went to jail because the policeman caught him. He was very sad and cried, and the policeman was annoyed. The burglar learned he can’t be a burglar because the policeman will catch him.