VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Continue talking about simple topics from: https://smartyingyu.com/ielts/ and ensure Emma is adding details without you having to ask why, who, when, how, etc…

If you set homework, make it a short piece of writing only. Needs more practice speaking.

My favorite planet is the Earth，which is the third planet from the sun in the solar system. About 70% of its’ surface are covered with oceans, where life appeared. At present, it’s the only planet has life.
I like Earth more than other planets because Earth is the planet where I live and I know. Earth have many countries with different races and cultures, in which we can experience many interesting things,and have many resources we can get to product objects which we want to own. There have four seasons in the Earth for us to feel the beauty of differents climates. And living there, we will never feel alone as we have family, friends or strangers to talk with. All of these can make us feel happy.
However, other planets are unknown to me,and unknown things are full of mystery. I don’t feel very good about mysterious things, so I think the Earth is the best planet.

My favorite planet is the Earth，which is the third planet from the sun in the solar system. About 70% of its’ surface is covered with oceans, where life appeared. At present, it’s the only planet which has life / where there is life.
I like Earth more than other planets because Earth is the planet where I live and which I know. Earth has many countries with different races and cultures, in which we can experience many interesting things, and have many resources we can get to produce objects which we want to own. There are four seasons on the Earth for us to feel the beauty of different climates. And living there, we will never feel alone as we have family, friends or strangers to talk with. All of these things can make us feel happy.
However, other planets are unknown to me, and unknown things are full of mystery. I don’t feel very good about mysterious things, so I think the Earth is the best planet.

Vocabulary

peaceful – relaxing, quiet, comfortable
eg. being in nature is so peaceful

bake = make sth in an oven

shop online
shop at Starbucks 

remote (adj) – a place with very few people around.
eg. I went to a very remote area

Grammar

if I have a good mood – If i am in a good mood – think: mood is a situation

they will haven’t things – they will not have things / they don’t have things