VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

Use some of the vocabulary from today’s upgraded writing.

Next Class Focus

Focus on speaking next class and do the homework from today the class after next.

Writing exercise

Be honest, i don’t often watch historical films because sometimes the theme is too heavy for me. Last week Nemo suggested me to watch Empire of the Sun which is directed by Steven Spielberg, and starring Christian Bale who now is a famous actor . He had a perfect performance in Batman.
The story is happened at 1941. Jim, a 10 years old English boy who is born in shanghai.His family was rich. Jim had a dream of becoming a fighter pilot.When World War II broke out, the Japanese occupied Shanghai. It was so poor that Jim was separated from his family and sent to the Japanese concentration camp.But he saw the fighter which is his favourate. More than three years of life in the camp made the naive Jim a bit more sophisticated.He learned to “do everything for food” which is the truth of the camp.But he still tried to help everybody who need help and known a Japanese boy who is like flighters as him.
More than three years, Jim spent the hardest days of the camp with his flying dream until the end of World War II. Eventually he reunited with his beloved parents.

Honestly / To be honest, I don’t often [ it’s not often that I ] watch historical films because [ as / due to the fact that / since ] sometimes the theme / subject matter is too heavy [ deep / much ] for me. Last week [ the other day / a week or so ago ] Nemo suggested me to watch Empire of the Sun [ he recommended a movie to me ] which is / was directed by Steven Spielberg, and starring Christian Bale who now is a famous actor [ big star / huge celebrity ] and who had a perfect performance in Batman.
The story happened / is set in 1941. Jim, a 10 year old English boy who was born in shanghai and whose family were rich [ wealthy / very well-off / very comfortable ], had a dream [ dreamed ] of becoming a fighter pilot. When World War II broke out, the Japanese occupied Shanghai [ During WW2 and the Japanese occupation of Shanghai ] and sadly / unfortunately Jim was separated from his family and sent [ forced to go ] to a Japanese concentration camp. However, he saw the fighter plane which was his favorite which inspired him. More than [ Over / In excess of ] three years of life in the camp made the naive Jim a bit more sophisticated. He (quickly / soon) learned to “do everything for food” which was the truth of the camp but he still tried [ attempted ] to help [ assist ] everybody who needed help [ were in need of help / those in need ]  and met [ came across ] a Japanese boy who liked fighters like he did / like him. For more than three years, Jim spent the hardest days of the camp with his flying dream until the end of World War II. Eventually he was reunited with his beloved parents.

Vocabulary

We have, in excess of, 300 staff = over 300

immigrated – yi min
eg. he immigrated to Australia when he was 14

production – everything involved in making a film
eg. I loved the production of the Revenant

suggest – everything, ideas, things
recommend – professional advice, thing
eg. Jesse recommends that students do homework
eg2. I can recommend a good place for you to learn English
eg3. I suggested that she could go to Smart English

— strangers —-
I saw him
I came across
—- relationship begins—-
I met him
I got to know him
I know him
—-relationship is clear—-
I’m friends with / colleagues with / … him
We’re close / I’m close to him

I do this. Like you do. = I do this. Like you. = I am like you. = we are similar
I like you. – xi huan

Grammar

at time
on day
in month / year