VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Use BECAUSE, AND, BUT, SO, WHICH, IF in your writing! Make longer sentences like:

I had class today and it was very fun.

I went to Smart English because I want Jesse to teach me English

August 23th Thursday
Today I went back to my home.I made a spacebase and the coolest is a spaceship.The spaceship is so cool.Do you want to see how cool are they?That even like a fighter.Hoora!SPACEBASE.

August 24th Friday
Jesse I want to give you something.It is very good.It is northpole’s snow.90% is air.Jesse don’t you think that was good?You want to learn?You just say oh truck truck and your scores are high?You have a prize.It is a draw,a perfect draw.It is from china.How world is made?

August 25th Saturday
When I’m in America I have a cute kitten.Her name is princess.I think she is the cutest on the world.When you closing doors~Just one black cat will chase Princess.She is scared.She go inside.She wanted to go inside.She is safe now.
Peter gave me some movies all talk about Trump and bumblebee.I gave Peter all talk about Prime.
Jerry and me are friends.He used lego to make bear, pup,fighter and bridge and Tian an men.Jerry he doesn’t know transformers but he has some cool thing like nerf.I like Jerry’s family.I don’t go to that house and don’t know how perfect are they.Jerry’s homework time are 100 minutes.That so long.Jesse your working time 2h?

August 23th Thursday
Today I went back to my home / came home.I made a spacebase / starbase and the coolest is a spaceship. The spaceship is so cool. Do you want to see how cool they are? It even looks like a fighter. Hoora!

August 24th Friday
Jesse I want to give you something which is very good. It is northpole’s snow which is 90% air. Jesse don’t you think that is good? Do you want to learn? You just say “oh truck truck” and your scores become high? You get a prize. It is a drawing, a perfect drawing and is from china. How is the world made?

August 25th Saturday
When I was in America I had a cute kitten and her name was princess. I think she is the cutest kitten in the world. When you close doors~Just one black cat will chase Princess. She will get scared and go inside because she wants to go inside where she is safe.
Peter gave me some movies which all talk about Trump and bumblebee so I talked to Peter about Prime.
Jerry and me are friends. He used lego to make a bear, puppy, fighter, bridge and Tian an men. Jerry doesn’t know transformers but he has some cool things like nerf guns and bows. I like Jerry’s family but if I don’t go to their house and don’t know how perfect are they. Jerry’s homework time is 100 minutes. That is so long. Jesse is your working time 2h a day?

but / because / so 

I like optimus prime because He is cool but He hates deceptacons and magatron so He stops them.

New York

I did / played golf for 30 minutes in the morning every day. After golf I went to the mountain house which was perfect because it is like a tree house and it is very high. I did everything in this tree house. It has a cat that is a kitten and the owner’s phone has the little kittens baby photo on it. We pat her head and she likes it so we put our hands on her mouth and she licked us.