VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Next Class Focus

review the homework from the 22nd.

Writing exercise

Longines made a mini-game which named Html 5 for the Chinese valentine day. In the mini-game, you will answer 4 different questions which related to the time, the distance, the trust and the value about your choose for love. And in the end of game, you would get your own score according to above four questions and own personality sentences to describe your love attitude.

Below is the point which I think could to be improved. The background of it is fancy but too complicated, I think it should be simple and elegant next time. The word size of the questions is too small, it should be larger. The game should be more interactive, like, if one user share own personality sentences to the other, his/her friend would see the user’s contents first, then click to enter the game and play it.

Longines made a mini-game which uses html 5 and is named Vote for Love for the Chinese valentines day. In the mini-game, you answer 4 different questions which are related to the time, the distance, the trust and the value about your choice for love. And in the end of game, you get your own score according to the above four questions and your own personality sentences to describe your love attitude / attitude to love.

Below is the point which I think could be improved. The background of it is fancy but too complicated, I think it should be simple and elegant next time. The text size of the questions is too small, it should be larger. The game should be more interactive, like, if one user shared their own personality sentences to others, his/her friend would see the user’s result first, then click to enter the game and play it.

Firstly, the text is too small, making it hard to read. Secondly, it could be more interactive, for example if a user shares their love profile with a friend, the profile is first displayed before allowing the friend to enter the game to play it.

Vocabulary

 

shake – shook (past)

I can do / I could do / I would do / I should do / I must do 

expression = like cheng yu
eg. you can’t have your cake and eat it too
eg2. what goes around comes around
simile = to say sth is like sth else
eg. he eats like a pig
metaphor = to say sth is the same as sth else
eg. he is a pig

Pronunciation

downstairs – aoooo aiiir 

it took – connect them

I want to go too = “i wont ta go too”