VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Writing exercise
The benefits of living alone
I lived with other people since I studied at middle school, actually I donāt like live other people, so I donāt like live at school. I have lived in Shanghai almost eleven years, and at the first several years I have to share an apartment with others, because I donāt have a lot of money to afford the rent. Maybe there are a lot of benefits about living with other people but I think it canāt compare with the benefits of living alone.
Two years ago I really started living alone, and I think this was the fastest two years that I grow up. I believe Iām a nice person and sometimes I want to help others if they need help, and I also believe Iām not a lazy person and I like cleaning. When I lived in with other people sometimes I have to spend my money and my time to social because Iām a nice person, and sometimes I didnāt know how to refuse. I also do a lot of cleaning work about the public place but a lot of my roommates never do it. That also wasted me a lot of time and energy. Another reason that make me want to live alone is sometimes other people will make noise and I donāt like this.
Since I lived alone I can just focus on myself and do anything that I want. No one can interrupt me and thatās wonderful.
The benefits of living alone
I lived with other people since I studied at middle school, actually I donāt like livingĀ with other people, so I donāt like livingĀ at school. I have lived in Shanghai (for) almost eleven years, and inĀ the first several years I hadĀ to share an apartment with others, because I didn’tĀ have a lot of money to afford the rent. Maybe there are a lot of benefits ofĀ living with other people but I think it canāt compare with the benefits of living alone.
Two years ago I really started living alone, and I think this was the fastest two years that I grow up. I believe Iām a nice person and sometimes I want to help others if they need help, and I also believe Iām not a lazy person and I like cleaning. When I lived with other people sometimes I had to spend my money and my time to be social because Iām a nice person, and sometimes I didnāt know how to refuse. I also do a lot of cleaning work about the public place but a lot of my roommates never do it. That also wasted a lot ofĀ my time and energy. Another reason that makes me want to live alone is sometimes other people will make noise and I donāt like this.
Since I lived alone I can just focus on myself and do anything that I want. No one can interrupt me and thatās wonderful.
Grammar
I did it – not still – past
I have done it – maybe finished
I have been doing it – experience that’s still happening
Vocabulary
astronaut – yu hang yuan
gravity – zhong li
space – tai kong
produce – make
scientist – ke xue jia
robot – ji qi ren
shrub – a small plant outside
solar light / solar powered light
deck chair
a pane of glass / glass panel
a slab of concrete
a logĀ of wood
a plank of wood
it is overlooking the ocean
light–shadeĀ
the exterior of the house is covered in glass panes, which reflect the stunning scenery of the surrounding landscape
ventilationĀ – above the oven to let the air out
sliding door
stove – on top of the oven to cook with
too small – bad
very small – ok
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