VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

The benefits of living alone
I lived with other people since I studied at middle school, actually I donā€™t like live other people, so I donā€™t like live at school. I have lived in Shanghai almost eleven years, and at the first several years I have to share an apartment with others, because I donā€™t have a lot of money to afford the rent. Maybe there are a lot of benefits about living with other people but I think it canā€™t compare with the benefits of living alone.
Two years ago I really started living alone, and I think this was the fastest two years that I grow up. I believe Iā€™m a nice person and sometimes I want to help others if they need help, and I also believe Iā€™m not a lazy person and I like cleaning. When I lived in with other people sometimes I have to spend my money and my time to social because Iā€™m a nice person, and sometimes I didnā€™t know how to refuse. I also do a lot of cleaning work about the public place but a lot of my roommates never do it. That also wasted me a lot of time and energy. Another reason that make me want to live alone is sometimes other people will make noise and I donā€™t like this.
Since I lived alone I can just focus on myself and do anything that I want. No one can interrupt me and thatā€™s wonderful.

The benefits of living alone
I lived with other people since I studied at middle school, actually I donā€™t like livingĀ with other people, so I donā€™t like livingĀ at school. I have lived in Shanghai (for) almost eleven years, and inĀ the first several years I hadĀ to share an apartment with others, because I didn’tĀ have a lot of money to afford the rent. Maybe there are a lot of benefits ofĀ living with other people but I think it canā€™t compare with the benefits of living alone.
Two years ago I really started living alone, and I think this was the fastest two years that I grow up. I believe Iā€™m a nice person and sometimes I want to help others if they need help, and I also believe Iā€™m not a lazy person and I like cleaning. When I lived with other people sometimes I had to spend my money and my time to be social because Iā€™m a nice person, and sometimes I didnā€™t know how to refuse. I also do a lot of cleaning work about the public place but a lot of my roommates never do it. That also wasted a lot ofĀ my time and energy. Another reason that makes me want to live alone is sometimes other people will make noise and I donā€™t like this.
Since I lived alone I can just focus on myself and do anything that I want. No one can interrupt me and thatā€™s wonderful.

Grammar

I did it – not still – past
I have done it – maybe finished
I have been doing it – experience that’s still happening

Vocabulary

astronaut – yu hang yuan

gravity – zhong li

space – tai kong

produce – make

scientist – ke xue jia

robot – ji qi ren

shrub – a small plant outside

solar light / solar powered light

deck chair

a pane of glass / glass panel

a slab of concrete

a logĀ of wood

a plank of wood

it is overlooking the ocean

lightshadeĀ 

the exterior of the house is covered in glass panes, which reflect the stunning scenery of the surrounding landscape

ventilationĀ – above the oven to let the air out

sliding door

stove – on top of the oven to cook with

too small – bad
very small – ok