VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Vocabulary

I think / I feel / I believe / It’s my opinion that / from my perspective 

yolk – the yellow of an egg

aware = to know sth

it is better that it is consistent with our showrooms main color.
it should be consistent with…

poster / banner / marketing sign

Dear xxx

Wuxi xishan Red Star Macalline was opened in Sep 23, 2017. The showroom is 500 squares. From design to finish just used 2 months. It’s very quickly, the whole effect is not bad, but I find there are several problems should be fixed.
1. We have choose a color as our cabinets’ color, but I realized it doesn’t match every showrooms. I think this color better to consistent with our showroom’s main facing’s color.
2. The black showering area’s dimensions should be fixed, because when our products were installed, the boards looks too low.
3. This showroom’s pop’s color are 偏色的, and this depends on the supplier which was the distributor choose. I think the best way is that we choose a good supplier to support the distributors.

These are the problems that I realized in this showroom, I hope this can give a guideline to design the next showrooms, and I also hope our country’s showroom can be more and more better in the future.

Best regards
Summer

Dear xxx

Wuxi xishan Red Star Macalline was opened in Sep 23, 2017. The showroom is 500 square meters. From design to finish it just took 2 months. It’s very quick and the whole effect was not bad, but I found there were several problems that should be fixed.
1. We have chosen a color as our cabinet’s color, but I realized it doesn’t match every showroom. I think this color should be consistent with our showroom’s main color.
2. The black shower area’s dimensions should be fixed, because when our products were installed, the position of the boards were too low.
3. The color of the showroom pops were not produced according to specification, and this is due to the supplier which was chosen by the distributor. I think the best way is that we choose a more suitable supplier to support the distributors in future.

These are the problems that I realized from this showroom, and I hope this can give a guideline to design the next showrooms. I’m really looking forward to better and better showrooms for our company into the future.

Best regards
Summer

Dear xxx,

As you may be aware, Wuxi xishan Red Star Macalline was opened in Sep 23, 2017. I would just like to update you on the specific details of the showroom as well as some feedback and ideas that I have regarding ways in which we could improve our showrooms in the future. 

Firstly, the showroom is approximately /around 500 square meters and from design to completion it just took 2 months. From my perspective this is a very quick turn around time but I feel that there is a lot of room for improvement and several problems that we could look at fixing.