VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

introduction: time, characters (names), like, situation

One morning, a dog called Bobby had a bowl of water, and she liked to play in the playground. She liked to play under the tree on the swing. She doesn’t like to share her water with other animals.

body: story

There was a cat who wanted to drink the water but Bobby said “You can’t drink the water, it’s mine!”. The cat was angry and she went away. Then, a bird came to the water and the bird was very thirsty and then the dog, Bobby, said “you can’t drink the water either”. The bird was very angry and she went home and then there was a spider who came down the tree and he said “can I drink the water?”, and the dog said “you can drink the water” because the spider was her friend. The dog went to sleep because she was very tired. Then the animals came there and drank the water.

conclusion: learn, what happened after?

The dog learned she can’t sleep because the animals will drink her water. Bobby felt very very angry because the animals drank her water but the other animals felt very happy.