VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

Write about something funny that your brother did. Write an introduction, a body and a conclusion. Follow “Telling a story”

Telling a story

1 – time, who, what you’re doing – introduction

2 – what happened? tell the details – body 

3 – what was the feeling / what did you think? what happened later? – conclusion

1 – Today at 7PM Yoyo came to have class with me. We always have English class on Friday night and Sunday night.

2 – Yoyo came into the room and met Dorothy. Dorothy is a little 9 year old girl. She gave Yoyo a present and Yoyo said thank you very much!

3 – Both Yoyo and Dorothy were very happy. I also was very happy because they met each other finally! I hope next time they can play together.

Families celebrate together

Families help each other. Mums and dads buy things for their kids, and take them to school. Kids will give their grandma and grandpa some water. Older brothers and sisters help their younger brothers and sisters by reading to them and singing to them.

Everyone in the world can be your family.

I ate cake and I have many many presents. When I opened the presents, I will very happy.

Last year on my birthday I have meal with my classmates. We ate orange and banana. The food was very good because the cook is very good. They are very happy.

famous – many people know and like someone
eg. Xi Jing Ping is very famous

In singing class I sing a song. It was named is Chong Er Fei and Song Bian. Every singing class I sing Lalalala and I can watch very long video and movie because we are very perfect.

In singing class I sing many songs. Two of them are named Chong Er Fei and Song Bian. Every singing class I sing scales and we can watch very long videos and movies because the teacher says we are perfect.