VIP Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

Do immediate correction story.

recently I really found some harms of having a late night which including harm of your skin and harm of your health. the most harm of your skin is make you look like older. the bad habit makes you have bags under your eyes and makes your face yellow. all of these is not every girls want. they should spend more money, cost more money on skin care products. And, harm to your body. Recently I felt the most harm is the harm to your brain. It makes you think slowly / slower and it makes you forget a lot of things so get up and sleep earlier is definitely important for our body.

recently I have really found some harms of having a late night which includes harm to your skin and harm to your health. the most harm to your skin is it makes you look older. the bad habit makes you have bags under your eyes and makes your face (look) yellow. all of these are not what every girl wants. they should spend more money on skin care products. And, the other side is the harm to your body. Recently I have felt the most harm of it is the damage to your brain. It makes you think slowly / slower and it makes you forget a lot of things. So, getting up and sleeping earlier is definitely important for our body.

Vocabulary

shift work – when your job has different shifts on different days
eg. a lot of doctors do shift work

desk light = DL

Grammar

it costs money / it takes time
i spend money / i spend time

he looks like an old man
he looks old / he looks happy / he seems happy

all of these is not every girls want – these problems are not what every girl wants