VIP Class Notes (Consultant)

Today we focused on:

07/09/2023 21:40-22:40pm

General introduction with Tang yu, discussion topics about his occupation, current state of his industry and the economy

Main concern is to help TY address his PPT presentations to foreign colleagues/ clients

A personal business proposal was sent to TY

TY was advised to write an example email where I helped to correct and fine tune

Grammar

TY email:

Hi Michael,
We can have a meeting with ABC and work out an overall payment plan according to actual unpaid invoices status,rather than a movement plan.

I told ABC yesterday that BG is working on a RFP of vendor selection on Us depot PCI is very interested in this project,so i don’t think PCI will stop providing services for AUS.

Corrected version:

Dear Michael,

A meeting has been organised with ABC, to work out a payment plan with regards to the status of the unpaid invoices.

I notified ABC yesterday that BG is working on a RFP for vendor selection on the US depot. PCI is interested in this project.

In my opinion PCI will continue their service for AUS.

Next Class Focus

TY will prepare some of PPT slides from work where we will help him to interpret and summarise his slides effectively.