VIP Class Notes 3rd May (Jesse)

Try to upgrade the following story. Changing either individual words or entire sentences.

i went to see a movie called beauty and the beast with my colleagues which was awesome. Before the movie we went to the city super to buy some food so we can eating while watching the movie. After work we walked to the theater which took 20 minutes because we were chatting with each other we walked slowly. I saw the movie when I was a child so a couple days ago i saw the poster which is line 1. It looked awesome so I mentioned to my colleagues “why would we go to see this movie?” and then they said “great!”. So we made an appointment to go to see this movie on Friday evening. The movie actually is nice and the characters were alive.

Hello,everyone. Today, I’m going to talk about an ideal weekend in my mind.
In the morning, I wake up naturally, have a big breakfast and then wander down to the pool for the first swim of the day. Then I would like reading an interesting novel with fresh juice at a café by the beach. I like seeing the beautiful sunset over the ocean. After dinner, I would like to take a bath with rose petals and a relaxing spa. That would be a perfect weekend for me.

Hello, everyone. Today, I’m going to talk about my ideal weekend.
In the morning, I would wake up naturally, have a big breakfast and then wander down to the pool for the first swim of the day. Then I would read an interesting novel and have some fresh juice at a café by the beach. I like seeing the beautiful sunset over the ocean. After dinner, I would like to take a bath with rose petals and have / before having a relaxing spa. That would be a perfect weekend for me.

In the morning, I would sleep in for as long as I’d like and get up, starting the day with a huge feast, and then just wander on down to the pool to swim a few laps. I would have some fresh juice in one hand and an interesting novel in the other, whilst sitting at a cafe by the beach. I would take in the evening view of the sunset as it peaks over the horizon, before turning in for the evening with a rose petal topped bath, and a relaxing spa. This is my dream weekend.

Vocabulary

homo sapien = humans

echo = a repeated sound

binary = 0100100110101

algorithm – a computer equation

i would do = if i could i will

spirituality – spi rityou al i tee

collision – 2 things coming together with force
eg. there was a car collision on the highway

there will be a coming together and a conversation surrounding this topic.

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