Profile Update Notes (Tony)

Your profile has been updated!

Next update July 2018

Profile Update Notes:

Writing:

Before: 1.5

Now: 2.0

Suggestion:  Check your grammar mistakes before you finish writing.

Dear Mrs hu
I was honored to be your employee.I liked you to work hard.And I believed you can succeed.Now I was studying personnel to understand about legal affairs，contracts，enterprise architecture how to build and so on.I liked study but I was lazy.And then you gave me power. I want to do a lot and continuou learning. The new office was being delivered decorated.I recorded every amount.And I planed to make new forms about admin. I hope I can really help you. Thank you so much，want us to work together happily. These days I made rules and regulations about new company. I thought it was very difficult. My former company’ rules had a lot of mistakes, so I found information on the internet and revamped old rules. this afternoon I had an interview. It was gaven me more experience.

Dear Mrs Hu
I was honored to be your employee. I like your work ethic. And I believe you can be successful. Now I am studying personnel to understand legal affairs, contracts and how to build enterprise architecture. I liked studying but I was lazy but you motivated me. I want to do a lot and continue learning. The new office was being decorated. I recorded every minute. And I planned to make new  admin forms. I hope I can really help you. Thank you so much, I want us to work well together. Recently I made rules and regulations about a new company. I thought it was very difficult. My former company’s rules had a lot of mistakes, so I found information online and revamped the old rules. this afternoon I had an interview. It gave me more experience.

Listening:

Before: 1.0

Now: 1.0

Suggestion: Ask questions to make sure you understand.

Vocabulary

work ethic – someone’s ability to do a lot of work, and do it well

eg: You have a good work ethic.

motivate – give someone feeling or reason to do something.

eg: He did not want to go to Sanya, maybe we can motivate him with a free plane ticket.

Read:

Does City Living Hurt Mental Health?

http://www.51voa.com/VOA_Special_English/health-lifestyle-city-living-mental-health-78514.html