Profile Update Class (Tony)

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Next update October 2018

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Listening:   4.15
Speaking: 2.75

The last thing you cooked:

The last thing I cooked was Korean Bulgogi, its kind of Korean BBQ but with soy sauce, I had a house party last Saturday at my place, so I invited a few friends to come over and cooked some Korean food for them. I choose Bulgogi to cook because there is a magic sauce for bulgogi online, so what I have to cook is heat the meat and pour the magic sauce and boil it for a little while.

The last thing I cooked was Korean Bulgogi, its a kind of Korean BBQ but with soy sauce. I had a house party last Saturday at my place, so I invited a few friends to come over and cooked some Korean food for them. I chose that dish because there is a magic sauce for bulgogi online, so what I have to do (to cook it) is fry the meat and pour the magic sauce then let it simmer it for a little while.

Reading: 3.75
Writing: 2.75

Speaking focus: Look for appropriate synonyms
Writing focus: Ask for homework or write your own diary for class correction

Old writing / speaking correction

Original:

Today I had discussion about my new project with my Chinese CEO and I’m working in a flagship store renewal project recently and I was supposed to report the final plan to headquarters Korea CEO day after tomorrow, but today Chinese boss he suddenly wanted to change everything about the plan! So we had long discussion about that, because that plan was the one he had already confirmed before, but at the end, with some sales data and some other team member talking he finally changed his mind to keep the original plan, so happy ending!

Edited:

Today I had a discussion about my new project with my Chinese CEO. Recently I’ve been working on a flagship store renovation project, and I was supposed to report the final plan to the CEO at the headquarters in Korea the day after tomorrow. But today the Chinese boss suddenly wanted to change everything about the plan! So we had long discussion about that, because that plan was the one he had already approve before / because he had already approved that plan before, but in the end, with the help of some sales data and some other team members persuading him, he finally changed his mind and decided to keep the original plan. So it was a happy ending!

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