OpenF2F Class Notes 8th March (Celeste)***

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Vocabulary

yard – place for kids and pets to play

garden – place to grow fruits and vegetables

office building/office complex

During I have been working as a sales person over five years, I really appreciate my clients they believe and help me. I still have deeply remembered a deal. At that time, my client just heard his friend’s friend wound bought a floor of office property at a party. he tried to introduce my project to him and gave his a suggestion to understood my project after to paid money. At the next morning, that man came to my work, after a half day to understand, he didn’t buy other office and choice my project.

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During my 5 years as a sales representative/associate/realtor/real estate agent I have come to really appreciate my clients because they believe in me and help me.

I have been working as a sales person for over five years and now/recently I really appreciate my clients because they believe in me and help me.

I still have a great memory of a deal/sale I made. At that time, my client just heard at a party that his friend’s friend would buy a floor of office property.

TBC

he tried to introduce my project to him and gave his a suggestion to understood my project after to paid money. At the next morning, that man came to my work, after a half day to understand, he didn’t buy other office and choice my project.

chews = choose

chose

choose / choosing / chose / have or had chosen / will choose