OpenF2F Class Notes 2nd March (Celeste)

Writing exercise

Edited

My friend arrived on Saturday morning and he is staying till Thursday so I am trying to show him the best tourist spots in shanghai. It’s exhausting.

On saturday it was raining when we were visiting Jing’an temple.
Saturday we visited Jing an temple and xitiandi. We had/ate ramen and for dinner we went to teppanyaki with many friends so it was very funny and delicious.
Sunday we went to old shanghai and yu garden. We went to din tai fung.
Monday we went to the Shanghai world Financial Center in pudong. I was thinking i would be afraid because it’s very high and transparent but no, I was not.

Upgraded Vocab

My friend arrived on Saturday morning and he is staying till Thursday so I am trying to show him the best tourist spots in shanghai. It’s exhausting.

On saturday it was raining when we were visiting Jing’an temple.

Saturday we visited Jing an temple and xitiandi.

We had/ate ramen and for dinner we went to teppanyaki with many friends so it was very funny and delicious.
Sunday we took the subway to old shanghai and yu garden. After, we walked to din tai fung which is

by my house

near my house

close to my house.

next to S. Shaanxi Station.

Monday we rode the subway to the Shanghai world Financial Center in pudong. I was thinking i would be afraid because it’s very high and the floors are made of glass. You can see all the way down to the ground from the top/101st floor.

It is very high and the floors are made of glass, I was thinking I would be afraid but I was not.

but no, I was not.


Original

Past continuous tense
When i was child i living in portugal
When my husband asked me in married i was not to talking because i’m moved/ filled.
When my parents gave me a dog i was enthusiasting.

Futur continuous
After my english class, i will be having lunch.
Today i can’t to visit my friend because i will be working.
At 11pm i can’t answer at the phone because i will be sleeping.

Have you ever done sth?
Have you ever become angry?
Have you ever

Edited

Past continuous tense
When i was a child i was living in portugal
When my husband asked me to marry him 

When my husband proposed to me I was speechless/ I was breathless / I was gasping for air / I was crying.
When my parents gave me a dog i was enthusiastic/I was jumping for joy/I was screaming from excitement. 

Future continuous
After my English class, i will be having lunch.
Today i can’t/cannot visit my friend because i will be working.
At 11pm i won’t answer the phone because i will be sleeping.

Have you ever done sth?
Have you ever become angry? Yes, I have become angry.
Have you ever ridden a horse? Yes, I have ridden a horse.

Have you ever been to a concert/show? Yes, I have been to a concert.