OpenF2F Class Notes 24th August (Celeste)

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Ocean park
Last week, we went to the HK to celebrate our first anniversary. We ate lots of different and dilecious food. The most of time for this trip was cover by eating.

The third day of this trip, we went to the Ocean Park. There were less people than We thought, because that day was Friday and we entered the part at morning. I want to introduce you the best entertainment- cable car. Because it was build amount of two mountains and along hillside, we can saw the sea-view as well. Of course the cable car have a little bit shaking. I was handling the handle all the time , I was saying to Chen “don’t move, don’t move “.

The second favorite we love were penguins and sharks. The penguins just stood at there long time, so lovely. The Sharks were very huge.

Certainly, there were others animals and entertainment events.

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Ocean park
Last week, we went to HK to celebrate when we got our marriage license last year. We ate lots of different and delicious food. Most of our trip we spent eating.

On the second day, we went to the Ocean Park. We entered the park on Friday morning, there were not a lot of people in Ocean Park, most of them were children. I want to tell you the best part- the cable cars. It was built among two mountains and along the hillside, we could see the sea as well. Of course the cable car had a little bit of shaking. I was holding the handle the whole time, I was saying to Chen “don’t move, don’t move”.

The second favorite part/thing we loved were the penguins and sharks. The penguins just stood there for a long time, they were very lovely. The sharks were very huge.

Certainly, there were others animals and entertaining things.

penguin ( peng gwin )

The most of time for this trip was cover by eating.
Most of the trip we spent eating.
Most of our time during the trip we ate.

thirty ( thir dee )
thirteen ( thir TTTTEEEEEENNNNNNN )

Whole Ocean Park was less people but that’s people almost children.
There were less people in Ocean Park, most of the people / most of them were children.
There were not a lot of people in Ocean Park, most of them were children.