OpenF2F Class Notes 22nd September (Celeste)***

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Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?

What is your favorite app and why?

Original

My favorite app is “xi ma la ya”. This app have a lot of stories who tell me histories and comedies. When I am in the train/subway, I will use this app to shut down the voice. Before sleeping I will use this app to help to sleep. I will use this app to teach my kids what about Chinese history / China’s history because I think we should be understand the histories. In this modern time the histories will help us to think anything can be better.  For example, in modern times our grandma and grandpa will take the best foods to children to eat. In past time, grandpa grandma eat the best food. In China, we believe the old man must be protected. They think the old people have a lot of knowledge.

Edited

My favorite app is “xi ma la ya”. With this app, I listen to a lot of stories about histories and comedies. When I am in the train/subway, I use this app to shut out the voices around me. Before sleeping I use this app to help me sleep. Sometimes, I use this app to teach my kids about Chinese history / China’s history because I think we should know/understand the histories.

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In this modern time/current society, the histories will help us to think anything can be better.  For example, today/now our grandma and grandpa will always give/bring the best foods to children to eat. In the past, grandpa  and grandma ate the best food. In China, we believe the old man must be protected. They think the old people have a lot of knowledge.

Men worked on the farm doing hard labor/work. Women stayed at home and took care of the house and children.

maid / housekeeper – takes care of the house

nanny – takes care of the children

Lazy Suzan – the round thing on the table to make the food go around the table