OpenF2F Class Notes 20th February (Celeste)***

Next Class: Review the edited writing below. Discuss any new vocabulary.

Writing exercise

I want to talk about my work experience. After i was finished hight school I found a job in one italian subsidiairy company in France. This company build her own brand of milling machine and i start like commerciale assistante. My tasks were to organize events, make offers, help customers and translate documentation. After 2 years in this job i evolve for after sales assistant in same company. My tasks were to manage 6 techniciens, buy and sell parts for repair/fix machines, make offers, client service, make invoices, visit custumers, read drawing for determinate which part i order or have problem, supply chain, transport machine, shipment, travel beetwen France to Italie and train interns. I stay in this second job 4 years. I loved this job and company but i desire to evolve/advance more so i changed for an other company in forklift. I was manager. I managed 12 techniciens and after 1 year i quited because i didn’t liked their organization/work method.

Edited

I want to talk about my work experience. After i finished high school I found a job in one Italian company  with a location in France. This company builds its own brand of milling machines and i started as a commercial assistant. My tasks were to organize events, make offers, help customers and translate documentation. After 2 years in this job i evolved to/I got promoted to sales assistant in the same company. My tasks were to manage 6 technicians, buy and sell parts for repair/fix machines, make offers, service clients, make invoices, visit customers, read drawings to determine which part i ordered or have problems with, supply chain, transport machines, shipment, travel between France and Italy and train interns. I stayed in this second job for 4 years. I loved this job and company but i desired to evolve/advance more so i started working for a forklift company as a manager. I managed 12 technicians and after 1 year i quit because i didn’t like their organization and work method.

Vocabulary

I don’t arrive to explain… – I can’t explain it… / I can’t explain what I mean / I can’t explain what I’m trying to say

Grammar

my work experience is/was/will be to do sth

eg. My work experience was to fill orders.