OpenF2F Class Notes 17th August (Celeste)

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This morning, when I came to Howie’s room to ask him to get up, there was no response. He didn’t look very well and he still lay on the bed. When I touched his forehead and face, I was surprised at his high fever. Oh, the little boy got ill. I asked him to have a glass of water and breakfast. After half an hour, I helped him take the medicine, then he was sleeping. As I have something important to do, I must go out today, so I called my father to come to my house to take care of his grandson. My father arrived at my house at 11:50 with lunch. I saw it’s yummy, but I didn’t have any time to eat. I quickly put on my dress and kissed Howie on his face.

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This morning, when I came/entered /went into Howie’s room to ask him to get up, there was no response/answer/reply. He didn’t look very well and he still was lying on his bed/ he was still in bed. When I touched his forehead and face, I was surprised that he had a high fever. Oh, my little boy got ill/sick/isn’t feeling well! I asked him to have a glass of water and breakfast. After half an hour, I helped him take the medicine, then he slept again. As / I have something important to do today, I must go out, so I called my father to come to my house to take care of Howie. My father arrived at my house at 11:15 with lunch that my mom cooked. It looked delicious/appetizing/tempting, but I didn’t have any time to eat. I quickly got dressed/ put on my clothes/dress and kissed Howie on his face. Then I left.

yummy /  delicious / appetizing