OpenF2F Class Notes 12th April (Celeste)

Demo StudentAngelina

I went hereĀ almost at 7 pm. – I arrived/came here at almost 7 pm.

The Bund – waitan

Last year when the festival celebrating the Chinese New Year held in the bund so too many people went there. In the night, then they it had an accident. Almost twenty people died or were hurt. So just because it too crowd. So when Chinese festival can comes, just stay home. Don’t go around. It’s very danger. that’s what I want to tell to you.

LastĀ Chinese New Year, on/at the bund there were too many people who went there. In the night, there was an accident. Almost twenty people died or were hurt because it was too crowded. So when Chinese Festival comes, just stay home. Don’t go out. It’s very dangerous. That’s what I want to tell you.

Original

A few days agoļ¼ŒI saw a film called ā€œthe revenant ā€starring Leo and he awarded Oscar because of it. In the film ļ¼ŒLeo was attached by a adult bear and he was almost die. The captain ordered two guys took care of him and his son. One of them was a mean man who only wanted Leoā€™ property so he killed his son and hurt Leoļ¼Œbecause he thought he would die sooner or later. But Leo was so strong and he survived . Finallyļ¼Œhe was saved by the captain and planed a revenge against the person who killed his single son. At lastļ¼Œthe criminal was killed by Leoļ¼Œbut the accompanying captain was killed by the criminal. I feel happy for Leo but Iā€™m sad for the capitain.

Edited

A few days agoļ¼ŒI saw a film called ā€œthe revenantā€ starring Leo and he wasĀ awarded anĀ Oscar because of it. In the film ļ¼ŒLeo was attacked by an adult bear and he almost died. The captain ordered two guys to takeĀ care of him and his son. One of them was a mean man who only wanted Leoā€™s property so he killed his son and hurt Leoļ¼Œbecause he thought he would die sooner or later. But Leo was so strong and he survived . Finallyļ¼Œhe was saved by the captain and planned a revenge against the person who killed his single son. At lastļ¼Œthe criminal was killed by Leoļ¼Œbut the accompanying captain was killed by the criminal. I feel happy for Leo but Iā€™m sad for the capitain.