Open F2F story correction 21st October (Sarah)

Yes,I can swim. I learned it 2 years ago. I want to learn it because I think swimming is a ability and a good sport. I learn it for 2 years. Now I can do the breaststroke, and almost do the crawl. When I swimming, I feel I like a fish. I can feel freedom and happy. It’s a good way to relax. When I can swimming. I had swim in the swimming pool and hotel swimming pool. But I never try swim in the sea or river, I think next time I will try that.

CORRECTION
Yes,I can swim. I learned how to do it 2 years ago. I wanted to learn to swim because I think swimming is an ability and a good sport. Now I can do the breaststroke, and almost do the crawl. When I am swimming, I feel I am like a fish. I can feel freedom and happiness. It’s a good way to relax. I have swam in a swimming pool and a hotel swimming pool but I never tried to swim in the sea or river. I think next time I will try that.