Open F2F Class Notes November 15th (Ben)

virtually 几乎

You speak English with virtually no accent at all.


motivating and encouraging

a resume = a CV = curriculum vitae


Original version

Dear Sir
My name is Lina, and I am a candidate to apply for the Character Animation Course.Please find enclosed my CV and portfolio in application.
The nature of my degree and my experiences have prepared me for this course . I have seven years experiences in scene and creature modeling, which is the firm foundation to continue the course.


Edited version

Dear Madam, Dear Sir
My name is Lina and I am a candidate to apply for the Character Animation Course of Sheridan School. Please find enclosed my CV and the link to my portfolio in application.
My degree and my experiences have prepared me for this course. I have accumulated seven years of experience in scene and creature modeling, which fits the requirements to apply for this course.

A cover letter should include

  1. some of your qualities (don’t tell your qualities, tell a story where we can see them – you can use your hobbies, job, personal challenges)
  2. some of your achievements
  3. your projects for the future
  4. why this school and this program are good
  5. why they fit your personal project
  6. what YOU would bring to this school