Open F2F Class Notes November 14th (Ben)

Demo StudentThalia

Corrections

I went to cinema –> I went to the cinema

Billy Lynn’s Long Halftime Walk is about a younger soldier who comes back to America from the war in Iraq. As his memories are shown to the spectators, he starts getting confused about the reason he needs to go back to war.

Grammar

As = 

  1. at the same time

I watch TV as I eat. I listen to music as I run

2. because 

I want to find a new job as I don’t like my current boss.

3. in the status of

As a man, you must protect your family. As a mother, I think spending time home is important.

I am all ears = 我洗耳æ­å¬

Original version

There are lot of genus in the deep sea, like coral and anemone  just  as flowers live in the sea   and super fish –  shark that keep the ecological  balance of the sea as the top of the food chain .

Edited version

There are a lot of kinds of animals in the deep sea, like coral and anemones such as flowers that live in the sea
There are also huge fish and sharks that maintain the ecological balance of the sea by staying at the top of the food chain.

Nowadays, this question does not bother me.

It works. –> It doesn’t work

That’s strange, the computer works but the phone doesn’t work.

It worked –> It didn’t work

Yesterday, the computer worked but the phone didn’t work