Open F2F Class Notes December 9th (Ben)
Writing exercise
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Quickly review
I had a quickly review with my boss just now, fortunately , most of views about me from my boss were ok , but there was also one suggestion. There are a little bit hurried when i executed daily works, which would lead not prefect results sometimes. Yes, I totally agree with that.
After this review meeting, i thought it deeply and found out 3 reasons why I am so hurried. The first one , I don’t want to work overtime because I have extra plan for off duty time. The second one, I overloaded and I also wanted to try my best go fast as possible as I can. The third one, I want to build good relationships with clients through that saving issues for clients.
Edited
A quick review
I had a quick review with my boss just now.
Fortunately, my boss’s view of me was mainly ok , but there was also one suggestion. I am a little bit in a hurry when i execute daily work, which sometimes would leads to imperfect results . Yes, I totally agree with that.
After this review meeting, I thought about it deeply and found out 3 reasons why I am in such a hurry.
The first one is that I don’t want to work overtime because I have other plans for my time-off.
The second one is that I am overloaded and I also want to try my best to go as fast as I can.
The third one is that I want to build good relationships with clients through that by saving them issues.
I have a quick review = I review quickly.
达到 reach
If I want to climb the corporate ladder, I need to stay cool-headed whatever happens. But I haven’t reached that stage yet.
an issue that requires me to help them
set a standard 设标准 = set the bar high
I wanted her to help me (to) double-check my work
In her opinion, I should pay more attention TO my work.
think about something
such + 名词
You are so dirty ! = You are such a pig !
I am in such a hurry.
Is it such a problem if I’m late?
save 节约
I will save you a taxi ride.
The subway saves us a lot of time. (=it helps us save time)
I saved you 200 RMB. I saved you a phone call.
- Hey, your phone fell out !
- Oh thanks, you saved me a lot of problems!
- Yes, I saved you a lot of time, money and hassle.
I want to save my customers problems.
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