Open F2F Class Notes _9th June (Harmony)

 

Table cloth: fabric/plastic to cover the table to keep it clean.

Fads/trends:  something that is popular.

Turn out the lights

“light the candles”:  to set the candles on fire.

Sing happy birthday

“blow out the candles”

 make a wish

 

 

We should let he choose, because he is the big one today – We should let him choose because its his birthday today/ because he is the birthday boy

 

Staff: employees

Stuff:  sth

Stuffed:  full of sth

 

  1. Angela re-tells me the story from yesterday (with no grammar mistakes!)
  2. We edit it
  3. Angela goes and writes it again (with no grammar mistakes!)

Re-tell:

My son’s birthday is coming up, and tomorrow is his birthday.  He will be 8 years old tomorrow.  IN our family we usually go to a restaurant to celebrate birthdays.  But tomorrow evening Howard has a English class so we changed the plan to eat dinner/celebrate tonight.

A few days ago my son told me he wanted a set of Lego for his birthday gift, so my parents bought a set of lego for him as his birthday gift.  My husband and I think he should read a lot of novels because he is growing up, we wanted him to learn lots of knowledge from books so we bought many useful books as a birthday gift.  My best friend Kelly also gave Howard a surprising gift, that’s a lovely stuffed mickey and she bought it from Disney.

 

 

Edited:

 

My son’s birthday is coming up he will be 8 years old tomorrow.  In our family we usually go to a restaurant to celebrate birthdays.  But tomorrow evening Howard has an English class so we changed the plan to eat dinner/celebrate tonight.

A few days ago my son told me he wanted a set of Lego for/as his birthday gift, so my parents bought it/him one/one for him.  My husband and I think he should read a lot of novels because he is growing up, so we bought many useful books as a birthday gift.  We hope he will learn lots of knowledge from the books.  My best friend Kelly also gave Howard a surprising gift, which is a lovely stuffed mickey she bought from Disney.

 

Tasty:  delicious/ yummy

Snacks:  food that you eat between meals (chips/apples/ cookies)

Ingredients:  the items that make up sth else (like food)

Ingredients of Bread:  eggs, flour, milk, sugar

Additives:  something added that isn’t natural

 

 

Original:

 

Howie’s Birthday
Howie’s Birthday is coming up, he will be 8
years old tomorrow!
Lego is Howie’s favorite and every year he many Legos as his Birthday gift. This year he also wanted it, so my parents bought him a set of Lego. But my husband and I bought a lot of novels for him as his Birthday gift because we think he is growing up. Reading is very useful in our lives, we hope Howie read more books so he can get lots of knowledge. My best friend,Kelly also gave him a surprising Birthday gift, it’s a lovely stuffed Mickey which was bought from Disney last week.
Howie liked all his Birthday gifts and thanked for all of us.
In our family, we usually go to a

 

Edited:
Howie’s Birthday is coming up, he will be 8 years old tomorrow!
Lego is Howie’s favorite and every year he got many Legos as his Birthday gifts. This year he also wanted it, so my parents bought him a set of Lego. But my husband and I bought a lot of novels for him as his Birthday gift because we think he is growing up. Reading is very useful in our lives, we hope Howie reads more books so he can get lots of knowledge. My best friend, Kelly, also gave him a surprising Birthday gift, it’s a lovely stuffed Mickey which was bought from Disney last week.  Howie liked all his Birthday gifts and thanked all of us/expressed his thankfulness to us/Howie appreciated all the gifts/he expressed his appreciation to us.