Open F2F Class Notes _25th May (Harmony) [1]

When you made this tattoo do you have little pain – when you got that tattoo was it painful?

tattoo:  art on skin.

Review:

mascara (mass care uhh)

face wash – liquid/cream/gel to clean your face

Fate: 命运  destiny, something that was going to happen, and is out of our control.  It was meant to be.

Eg.  Meeting my husband was fate.

Original:

The total area of all structures combined within Rici park of SIIC is 280 thousand square meters. It includes more than 1800 houses where 3000 elderly people can live. This complex has shopping areas , a fitness center, a hotel, a Ruijin hospital, a college for elderly people and so on, all of the service centers are for the golden period of elderly people’s lives.

Retell:

The total area of all structures be combined within is 280 thousand square meters.  Where 3000 people can live in, it includes 1800 houses.  This complex includes/has a elderly college, a hospital, a restaurant, a hotel, and so on.  This complex is for elderly people.

Edited:

The total area of all structures combined within Rici park of SIIC is 280 thousand square meters.  3000 people can live there, and it includes 1800 houses.  This complex has an elderly college, a hospital, a restaurant, a hotel, and so on.  This complex is for elderly people.

ketchup:  sauce made from tomatoes to put on food (like fries and hamburgers)

bland:  no flavor, plain

Original:

My landlord has two pets, the one is a kitten who are abandoned at outside when the landlord find her and she looks got sick in rainy. now the landlord have take care of her and her gots heathy . the other one is a hen, the landlord took her went to outside everyday and as return, the landlord can got a egg from the hen. take care of them is a part of happiness retired life.

Edited:

My landlord has two pets, the one is a kitten who was abandoned outside when the landlord found her. She looked very poor and sick in the rain. Now the landlord has taken care of her and she got healthy . The other one is a hen, the landlord takes her outside everyday and in return, the landlord can one egg from the hen each day. Taking care of them is a part of happiness in retired life.

He has taken care of her —- you can change “the landlord”  to he/she later int he story.