Open F2F Class Notes 9th August (Raph)

“I was creating templates and changing formats all day”

Story
At the end of this month I will visit Singapore. I will first go to Hong Kong and from there I will go to Singapore. My classmates’ family and my family will go there together. Totally there is three families. We will visit the day zoo and the night zoo and the marine life world and the water play garden. We will visit there for five days.

Edited Story
At the end of this month I will visit Singapore. I will first go to Hong Kong and from there I will go to Singapore. My classmates’ families and mine will go there together. Totally we will be three families. We will visit the day zoo, the night zoo, the marine life world and the water play garden. We will stay there for five days.

Original Writing
In this Olympic Games, a girl, whose name is Fu Yuanhui and she is a swimming athlete, became a household word through one match yesterday. In the semi-final of 100 backstroke, she got her best performance and got into the final match successfully. When she answered the journalist’s interview, she expressed her inner feeling without reservation, and her facial expression was very funny. She was very surprised that she could swum so fast, and had used all her strength to swim. And she was very satisfied with her performance.

Edited Writing
Yesterday at the Olympic Games, a swimming athlete whose name is Fu Yuanhui, became a household name through one event. In the 100 backstroke semi-finals, she had her best performance and got into the finals successfully. When she answered the journalist’s interview, she expressed her inner feelings without reservation, and her facial expression was very funny. She was very surprised that she could swim so fast, and had used all her strength to swim. She was very satisfied with her performance.