Open F2F Class notes 8th September (Eddie)

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factual = which contains facts rather than opinions

specs = specifications = technical data about a product such as a laptop, a smartphone etc

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Today Cook convened a production conference about Iphone7, iphone7s and Iwatch2. The memory of getting my first phone at my 12th birthday is still fresh. That phone is Samsung, red and shaped like a cosmetics container with a mirror. At that time, students having phone was rare. My classmates were all jealous of me and wanted to fiddle with my phone .Precious interesting messages chatting with my friends were preserved to read again. Because of limited internal storage, I selected to delete some with reluctance.
My favourite phone is Iphone4 that totally widen people’s view of smartphones. Iphone 4 is equipped with Retina screen which is 4 doubles pixels compared Iphone 3GS. And around the world Iphone 4 was the thinnest at that time.
I have lost my passions to phones because they are just the tools to connect others for me now.

Edit:

Today Tim Cook introduced the  iPhone7, iPhone7 Plus and the iWatch2. The memory of getting my first phone on my 12th birthday is still fresh. It was a Samsung, red and shaped like a cosmetics container with a mirror. At that time, having a phone as student was rare. My classmates were all jealous of me and kept begging me to let them try it. Precious interesting messages chatting with my friends were preserved to read again. Because of limited internal storage, I reluctantly had to delete some of them.

My favourite phone is the iPhone4, which totally widened people’s view of smartphones. The iPhone 4 came equipped with a Retina screen which packed 4 times the number of pixels that the iPhone 3GS did. Also, at the time of its launch, the iPhone 4 was the thinnest smartphone in the world. / the world’s thinnest smartphone.

In the meantime, I have lost my interest in phones because I realized they were just tools to connect with others.

http://www.theatlantic.com/politics/archive/2016/09/bill-durham/498926/