Open F2F Class Notes 28th December (Tony)

Vocabulary

swollen – bigger than it should be

eg: “Her throat was swollen.”

Corrections

every year

I took my grandma to the hospital to get a check-up.

My back is so tense, because her bed is too hard

Original –

This morning I went to work at six o ‘clock , because the instrument stopped working ,my college need my help her.so I very very hard get up. Outside is very cold and black，it’s to bad all day . I don’t have enough sleep so I feeling no power. I need charger.

Correction –

This morning I went to work at six o ‘clock, because a medical instrument stopped working. My coworker needed my help. So it was extremely hard to get up. Outside was very cold and dark，it was too bad all day. I didn’t have enough sleep so I feel like I have no energy. I need to recharge.