Open F2F Class Notes 26th September (Lina)

My family is not in there – My family is not there

Hang out with your friends to some place in shanghai – hang out with your friends at some places in shanghai

China used silver, gold to their coins – China used to use silver and gold to make their coins / In the past china used silver, gold and bronze in their coins

Halloween – “ghost festival”

Original:

In this National Day, I will go back to my hometown which is a village in Henan. When I am in there,My job is looking for a house to buy. Buy a house is my strongest as a real estate sales. About property, In the past ten years，the housing price of the main cities’ have grown tripled or tenfold. but fortunately,the county close my village are not higher than before, even double. Most people moved to big city. It is a good satiation for my hometown.

Correction:

In this National Day, I will go back to my hometown which is a village in Henan. When I am in there, my job is to look for a house to buy. Buying a house is my strongest skill as a real estate sales agent. About property, in the past ten years, the housing prices in the main cities’ have increased tripled or tenfold. But fortunately, in the county close to my village the prices are not much higher than before, but not even double. Most people have moved to big cities. It is a good situation for my hometown.

Example:

During this Nation Day holiday, I will go back to my hometown, which is a village in Henan, to look for a house to buy. Because I work in real estate, buying property is one of my strongest skills. The housing prices in major cities have tripled or tenfold over the last ten years, but in my home town they have not increased as much, they haven’t even doubled. Therefore it is a golden opportunity for me to buy.