Open F2F Class Notes 26th March (Tony)

Vocabulary

we don’t usually use sauce on veggies

jump through hoops – to do some unnecessary things to achieve a simple result.

eg: “You can change  your major in china but you have to jump through some hoops first.”

Pronunciation

sauce – Saw s’

Writing exercise

Original –

The famous architect is preparing a project of building an urban park.He has an idea of creating it with both traditional and modern features which bringing fruitful feeling when wandering in the park.
The architect managed to finish his drawing after three months hard work.The key point of design is the eastern pavilion located in an artificial lake.To make sure the pavilion unique for visitors,any redundant internal structure should be avoided.And it’s better to have a visual impact.Then the fashionable VR(virtual reality)technology is going to be introduced in the project.Every visitor has access to experience high-tech just by a right click.

Correction

A famous architect is planning an urban park project. He has an idea of creating it with both traditional and modern features which bring good feelings when wandering in the park.
The architect managed to finish his blueprints after three months of hard work. The key point of the design is the eastern pavilion, located in an artificial lake. To make sure the pavilion is unique for visitors,any redundant internal structures should be avoided. It would be better to have a visual impact. Then VR(virtual reality)technology is going to be introduced in the project. Every visitor has access to have a high-tech experience  just with the click of a button.