Open F2F Class Notes 22nd April (Tony)

Vocabulary

make it easier to vote

gerrymandering – changing voting districts to control the election.

eg: Gerrymandering can change the election results each year, because they change the voting map to get the results they want.

transparent – can see through

refugee – a person running away from a war in their country

eg: There are millions of Syrian refugees in Turkey.

speech – someone speaking in front of an audience

eg: I liked to watch his speeches.

Original –

today I see the dentist with my boy from Pudong to Huangpu district by bike. my boy was very exciting in the road，becasuse it is the firsrt time to long distance by bike. and when arrived at the old ferry，we take the board to pass the revier，and then continue ride the bike to hospital.however when we arrived at the hospital，the doctor would finished today morning”s work ,and told us wait till they start to work at afternoon. I felt I made a wrong decision to ride by bike today. Actually ride bike is a good traffic way,but it needs spend more time Maybe you need have a good judge before made the decision by bike

Correction – 

Today I took my boy to the dentist from Pudong to Huangpu district by bike. my boy was very excited on the road，because it was his first time to go a long distance on a bike. and when we arrived at the old ferry，we took the boat across the river，and then continued riding the bike to the hospital. however when we arrived at the hospital，the doctor had finished this morning”s work ,and told us to wait till they start work(n.) in the afternoon. I felt I made a wrong decision to ride a bike today. Actually riding a bike is a good transportation way,but it needs more time.  Maybe you need to have good judgement before making the decision to ride a bike.